We Rawr, You Read

You guys are amazing!

Hey, I am writing a little something, and I was wondering if you could [please] check it out and give me some feedback? My friends say they like it but I need some completely honest comments on it. Thanks. :)

Everything happens fir a reason, everything happens for a reason.
          

ISSUE 2 OUT NOW!!!
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/7472926-rawr-magazine-issue-2

To everyone that entered our contest we have had loads of entries on the title contest but less on the covers outfit and trailers please enter more contests and if you haven't entered any ENTER remember you don't have to be a professional!

Could allege rawr team (people that work for us) please pm us ASAP thank you

hello, first of all thank you for the follow, since you have followed us you will be mentioned (shouted out) in the 'Rawr Magazine Issue 2' if you have any issues with that let me know :) if you have tumblr can you follow us there too via rawrmagazine.tumblr.com
          
          if you want another shout out you can join our discussion (link at the end of this message) and it will let you know what you have to do.
          
          thank you for reading :)
          
          Frankie -the Rawr Team-
          
          link:
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/forums/vanilla/discussion/603978/ask-rawr-questions-about-anything-for-a-magazine-your-name-will-be-mentioned-if-wanted
          
          Magazine link: 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/22707863-rawr-magazine-issue-1-copyright-act-%C2%A9-2013

thanks for everything guys!

This is the first issue of rawr! I hope you like it and don't for get to comment, vote and follow :)
          OH yeah! Please tell us how to improve our magazine via PM only! Thank you :D
          
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/22707863-rawr-magazine-issue-1-copyright-act-%C2%A9-2013