RayLorca

Just reposted the next 3 chapters of A Descent into Darkness!

Coldblooded_Man

so, i like your story. And as i said, i will keep following it because its good. 
          I havent had time to reply to your feedback but i will improve mine as well. Just wanted to tell that. Cheers mate.

RayLorca

@Coldblooded_Man im gonna repeat myself cause I just replied to your comment but thank you for saying! Yeah yours is really intriguing. The shift between the prologue and the first chapters, i admit you had me thinking it was something  very different which is effective story telling. Will keep reading tomorrow (my tomorrow). Thanks again!
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RayLorca

It's been a long time but gonna try this again. Have written a stand alone sequel to A Descent into Darkness called The Weight of Their Silence and gonna try posting a new chapter every day. Some of the characters and plot threads are touched on, but it's a new story with several new characters, trying to take a different, more serious tone of people trying to do good while living in the same world as the characters of the prior novel. Hoping it's a little better too, lol.