Rayhana Abubakar

Hey guys I'm going to go on a break from wattpad to focus on my gcses soon yh I'll be back December 2027 inshaallah  pray for meet 

I have loved your story so far♡♡♡
                And I have looked through your Leo Valdez x Reader reading lists lol. Have you read "Love Story" though??? It's a Leo Valdez x Reader story as well with a Roman Poseidon's Child Reader! It's one of the stories that I really liked to read currently!
          
          I also like yours too!! I hope you update soon, take care♡

Hey guys, I probably won't be able to update anything coz my mom found wattpad and a bunch of Leo Valdez x Readers and found I had a crush and her being a practising Muslim was very andry and deleted it on my phone and with family link she blocked it let's just wait until I buy my iPad soooo yh don't worry I'll keep drafts and mass upload them. You may need to wait at least a year
          See u next year
          BTW love you @Thesourgummyworm go check her books

I JUST SAW SOMETHING AWESOME!
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          *points at you*
          
          Oh, it's you. <33
          
          RaynaCabin3: I think you're amazing because your comments always seem to brighten my day! <3
          
          (send this to anyone you think is amazing)

Heyyyy....✯

Hello! I responded to your message on my page, but in case you didn't see it, I thought I'd post it here. <3
          
          I read through your Leo Valdez X Reader
          one shots, and I have to say it's so cute
          and well written!
          
          I especially like the complexity of your Y/n
          character and her background!
          
          I only have two small suggestions, and by
          all means, you do not have to follow them
          like the book as is :)
          
          1. Try breaking your text and your
          dialogue apart. 
          By that, I just mear
          instead of writing a paragraph, "and then
          putting your dialogue here.
          
          Ex)
          Try writing your paragraph and
          descriptions.
          
          "And then adding dialogue here."
          
          Your dialogue is really funny! And this
          way, it won't be lost underneath some
          text,
          
          2. Don't be scared to show your
          characters inner reactions to things.
          
          I really liked when Tauturaus said, "Hello,
          daughter."
          But then Y/n didn't have any reaction to it
          If that was intentional, then by all means
          keep going. But if it wasn't, maybe add a
          sentence where Y/n questions what he
          just said, denies it, and then uses that as
          her force to try and fight him
          
          Otherwise, I REALLY REALLY love your
          story. It's the perfect amount of sweet and
          tension, and I'm really excited to read any more parts!
          
          Not to mentioned I'm honoured you asked
          ME.
          
          Love,
          Thesourgummyworm <3