You're doing a great job with your first book. It's not easy writing a story. Please don't give yourself anxiety, trying to make it perfect! As you know, from reading other authors books, each book gets better.
This story was recommended in one of my Facebook groups. I saw the post went directly to it, was finished in about two hours. It was that engrossing I could not stop. I have one request in one request only I really do not feel sorry for Jonah in any way, but please Lord let him find out about Sophia and the day that Isa broke her arm!
I posted it on Facebook, so glad I’m not the only one that feels that way. Her and his family need to be exposed for playing him as a fool. He’s the idiot that never gave a good woman the chance she deserved and repeatedly choosing that evil woman over his child. Nope I want his to sit in the consequences of his actions.