ReMi

oh yea I’m also from the Cayman Islands 

I’m on chapter 3 and I must say this book so far is very well written!! You’re doing a great job with writing it. I’m excited to see where the story is going! 

El's character and backstory has been totally revamped!
          
          This is a super exciting change! <3333

'Trimming the fat' in my writing as we speak. Sharpening the narrative focus. Creating more suspense and consequently providing less concrete answers. I have some tantalizing new story beats to add as well, once I get to THAT part of the story. ;p

Refocusing Nephilim to be more of a tragic romance than other things. A genre I've found a deep connection to with some recent readings.

I was thinking, Nephilim might work better as a graphic novel.

Got some great advice on how to touch up my sentence structure. So I'll be gradually working through every chapter, making the appropriate changes.

Going through editing some of the more hastily written bits. ~

New angel POV scene added to the start of chapter 4!!!

There! Chapter 15 is up. Now, all that's left for Part One is the epilogue!
          
          After that I can check word length, make some final final edits and pad out the words a bit if needed. Then, I guess all that's left is to mark it as a fully completed Book One of the Nephilim trilogy!