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@mofuangel  Thanks.

@Immortal_dragon don't worry i didn't
           take anything you said to heart i appreciate both of your support and wish that you guys will encourage me in the future

@Immortal_dragon Yes, I agree. Let us all come in peace. haha.

@Re_14_Eye I understand but thanks anyways. I did not take it in a mean way.

@Immortal_dragon Thanks for your opinion I appreciate it.

@Immortal_dragon one more thing, even though u meant well, comments like this can be discouraging to young writers

@Re_14_Eye no i think your work is great in my opinion, and youre just 13!! im pretty sure u can become big someday through your amazing writing skills , im looking forward to more of your works

@Immortal_dragon  i know u didn't mean this in a bad way, but commenting this sounds offensive to the writer's work. next time you comment think twice because you might be making the writer uncomfortable, i suggest being a bit more careful with your words.

@Immortal_dragon Is my English that miserable...... haha... hmm

@Immortal_dragon actually it is umm..............