Hey, thank you so much for judging "Castles of Roses" in The Visions of Grandeur Awards! I appreciate your comment on versatility; I really try to explore different forms of poetry since I am very new. I only started writing poems a year and a half ago. I'd love to expand on my imagery in my new poetry collection, "The Mourning Cloak," once I get back to updating it.
The poem "Tension" is also one of my personal favorites. Somehow, its meaning is different now than when I first wrote it, as I unintentionally foreshadowed the outcome of my own relationship.
I love your points, and your feedback is very detailed and concise. Thank you for that!