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I just finished “More than Friends” by ynhpstories and it was good! I really liked this book in more ways than one. It was very lgbt friendly, I love that and it’s always a plus. This book was an x reader, and is a completed book ending with 82 chapters. There is no smut (for those uncomfortable with it). I really liked this book rating it a 7/10. This book had long chapters and if you are a lover of Fred you will really enjoy this book. There are a couple things of note though, firstly it has rapid unnecessary changes in point of view. As a reader we don’t need to know that Fred likes her when the main character is questioning it herself, this takes away from the experience when they finally do end up together. Secondly the main character wants to be an auror and it’s noted throughout the book, but for someone who wants to be an auror so bad, why are you so weak? That’s just a personal note that I added. Otherwise this book was really entertaining and enjoyable to read, I think this is a fantastic book for Fred Weasley lovers and beginner readers! If you do like it please give the author a follow and like every chapter. 
          

So I just got done with the 5 chapters that “Heart of Ash” by -CAMERQNS offered.
          And really those 5 chapters were really impressive. This story is ongoing so there wasn’t much to read, but the little bit I did read was good! I liked the plot of the main character, and I was roped in by the last chapter. These chapters are mid length long. And there was no romance element to it because it was only 5 chapters. But with that being said I rate the chapters I did read a 7/10. The only complaint I have is that I got more main character background before jumping right into the nitty gritty of the book. I felt like that it was moving in a very fast direction. But otherwise a pretty interesting read and I’m sure once it’s completed it will be amazing and worth it. The minor details that the author added really made the book for me.  So please give it a read if interested. And if you do read it make sure to like every chapter and follow the author. 
          

Wow wow wow, this book is so good so far, there are only 15 chapters so far in the book “breath of life” by Yviwrites and honestly I didn’t want it to stop. I easily rate this book a 9/10 and it isn’t even finished yet. I love everything about it so far, character dynamics, how they connect the original book to the story while still providing original content and putting their own twist to it. That main character is written so well so far and I’m am really here for it. I highly highly highly recommend this book to everyone. Let it be noted that I don’t know what the future holds for this book because it is still being written but at the point that I’m reading it, it has no smut, and the romance hasn’t hit its peak. But at the point that I’m at I’m going to put it under my Liam Mairi category. Wow honestly this book is really great I honestly have nothing negative to say about it other than it not being finished. Immediately I connected with the main character and their original characters. I felt like I was reading a little slice of home. Please if you love the fourth wing books give this book a try cause I know you will love it like I did. And make sure to like every chapter and follow the author. 
          

Here are my thoughts about “royl1” by -missswan. It being 27 chapters was a little bit of a waste, I think all sequels should be added to this book, not only would it make it longer to connect more with the characters but it would also keep people’s attention. As this book was not long and detailed enough to really connect with the characters. I rate this book a 4/10 I thought the concept was really great! But like I said I didn’t connect to the original characters because there were so many and no time to really connect to them. On top of that I really wish the author stuck with just the main characters instead of flip flopping back and forth between the friends, it took away from the plot of the story a great deal and left open endings and added so much confusion. And while this book is a romance book it really isn’t, it’s very story moving heavy and you don’t get much world building at all. I thought that it was an entertaining read, great great great book for beginners. It’s super short, has no smut, and more plot driven than romance driven. I think that this book could you so much more detail and backstory and depth. I think this is a great base line for a fan fiction it just needs editing and additional content. That being said if you are thinking “who is the main love interest” it’s Cameron Mahkent, but even then you don’t get much content out of it. But if you do read this make sure to like every chapter and give the author a follow. 

So I just got done reading this book, “The Lone Wolf” by ynhpstories and I have my thoughts. First thing I will say is that it’s very original. And the second is thank god the author decided to stop doing Fred’s point of view half way into the book, it felt very unnecessary and took away from the book a lot. The plot line of her being remus’s daughter was brilliant I love playing into the whole marauders era, but I wish that Tonks wasn’t her mom cause she isn’t much older than the Weasley twins. And I also felt like I didn’t get context about the main characters relationship with Fred, it felt like start of the book automatically she has a crush on Fred and he has a crush on her and that’s it.  And some of the plot lines had some major plot holes. And even maybe run it through a spelling and grammar checker. This book has a great concept. It is 73 chapters and completed. It doesn’t have any smut, and is good for first time readers. Ultimately though I did rate this book a 3/10. I felt like this could have been so spectacular and just needs more detail, I would even love to see this character incorporated into the main plot some more. After the goblet of fire this book just gets better as you go. Some things I couldn’t look past is the incorporation of song lyrics inside the book that makes it painfully obvious, and while I love the inclusion of music adding to the story actually putting the lyrics into it took away the effect for me. I would suggest an alternative being adding a point where to play a specific song to really tap into the emotions of it. This is a person x reader book, so you really get to put yourself into the book and make your imagination run wild. This book is perfect for beginners, someone who likes long chapters, and people who are uncomfortable with smut. If you do read this book please make sure to follow the author and like every chapter. 
          

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Hi, @ReadandReveiw Could you maybe check out my new fanfic 'Unwillingly'? It's not finished yet and I just started it but I could use some critical thinking!