Reader10015

I can't really post in chapter by chapter hahahaha, usually I just detail out all the things I thought of in one single paragraph.
            
            Well, from the first part I thought it was really interesting, although some actions are kind of questionable. I mean it is action-packed can't lie about that hahahaha, though it feels a bit rushed with the way they do things. Also a lot of grammatical errors and speaker tags, like in the last one I'm pretty sure the Light Lord was the one speaking when he said. For miscalculating me.
            
            Then the next chapter was a bit op for me hahaha, like Ishiki seems very strong since he can jump so high. Although the pacing is going by really, really fast and some actions seems kinda forced. The story is interesting but the actions are still a bit questionable hahaha.
            
            Then the next chapter (I'm at Chapter 3)
            It's still a bit too fast-paced since maybe I think the wordplay needs a bit of work. I'm pretty sure you've gotten better since I'm still at the early stages of the story hahahaha.

@Reader10015 Hahahha 

@Reader10015 I forgot why I didn't name this account my pen name but oh well hahahaha

@BlueArtix Hello hahaha :D

@Reader10015 Thanks for your time reading it...I don't mind when you will finish it. Just read in your own pace.

@MelAniv101  Its fine, but there are so many chapters hahahaha, its gonna take a while before I catch up to the latest ones, then there's the other story which actually sounds pretty interesting hahaha

@Reader10015 Thanks! I will read yours in return!

@MelAniv101 I'll definitely check it out hahaha, good to know there's more filipino writers out there hahaha