Readerofthenight

So some people said my new story The Great sacrifice was not really a romance. I would agree the store is really about the main character and her overcoming, as a writer I tried to challenge myself to not focus so much on that as I did in her haven. I really like well develop the character from The great sacrifice is compare to Lisa from Her Haven. I will be using this to better write my stories in the future. I hope you can still enjoy The Great Sacrifice as it comes to a end.

Readerofthenight

So some people said my new story The Great sacrifice was not really a romance. I would agree the store is really about the main character and her overcoming, as a writer I tried to challenge myself to not focus so much on that as I did in her haven. I really like well develop the character from The great sacrifice is compare to Lisa from Her Haven. I will be using this to better write my stories in the future. I hope you can still enjoy The Great Sacrifice as it comes to a end.

Readerofthenight

New story coming out soon, but just a heads up its not edit and it is not going to have a good magical ending, but I waited to make sure that it was something I wanted to complete before posting it so I hope you enjoy comment and vote for ot

darkangel12086

Now I must say; I was planning on not finishing reading this due to very crucial reason. There are a lot, and I mean A LOT of spelling, grammar and punctuation error, that just take you out of the story. And one more thing in my opinion you don’t need to have a full on Italian words then translation if Vincent’s POV, I think it is a little bit unnecessary. I suggest that only conversations that are Italian should be written in Italian, however please put a translation.  I’ve notice that you wrote a whole paragraph in Italian then translate the whole paragraph, but the conversation in Italian doesn’t have any. I just get confuse.
          
          Thank you and keep on writing.

darkangel12086

One more side note. Is  Lisa a nurse or a doctor? Because if I remember correctly she was mentions to be a nurse, but I've also read that she is studying to be a doctor. A little incite, if you are studying medicine and you're at the hospital; you are either an intern or a resident. Now, if you are a intern/resident you are already considered a doctor and work as a full fledged doctor. The only difference is that inters don't have a licence while resident doctors do.
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