@GhostieChanS Quick question, would you like to leave my suggestions and edits? They may or may not be helpful but I know some authors like others to check there work. By the way I started to read your book and I love your concept!
@JustYourAverageKate Yeah people my age are just so awkward about staring conversations. But older people have the whole talking thing down. Of course it doesn't help that I never try to start one, and end up reading a book in the corner, but what can you do?