The account's shared by two co-editors: Me and Julie. We both love writing,The Hunger Games,and GOD! If you need anything edited, just leave a message. We usually divide the chapters among ourselves, but let us know if you want something specific edited my one of us!

CHELSEY:

Writing Style: One word. Adjectives. I would die if adjectives were never birthed from the world of Writing:) I make sure the reader is able to grasp the feelings that the author is trying to convey<3 Strong point: Dialogue!

Before: 

"The bus was sitting on the edge of this terrifying, cliff. At the bottom I could see the sharp rocks sticking up from underneath the dirt and I was worried I would fall out the bus and land on one of the rocks." 

Text Copyright © by XxAmorVocexX "Hallucinations" (MUST READ!:))


After:

I was terrified as the bus sat dawdling on the edge of the torturous cliff. I moved closer to the window slowly, as if any sudden movements would launch the bus into a deadly free-fall. Large, jagged, rocks were jutting out of the ground at the bottom of the cliff, and I could’ve sworn I saw remains of a forsaken car laying down there."  



JULIE:
 
Writing Style: Elaborative. Detailed. I love making my stories come to life by creating a smooth flow between all of the descriptors. I cannot read anything dull, but I sure will edit it! Lol, jk, I'm sure you are all great writers!

 Before:

"The prince had disheveled brown hair. Light shined down from the lit chandelier and ran along the strands of his hair like streaks of moonlight. Two deep emerald eyes gazed at me. His figure had a strong build..."

Text Copyright © by Caramelapplee "Cloaked Beauty"(GREAT Fantasy to read!)


After:

"The prince had an array of disheveled brown locks illuminated by the light pouring down from the lit chandelier, which settled itself along the strands of his hair like streaks of twinkling moonlight. Two bottomless emerald eyes gazed up at me. His figure had a strong and sturdy build..."