@Chantokyo85 Hello, I read your message, and appreciate your encouragement, but as I had said in the story, I am currently not in the right mental space to continue writing as of now since I want to focus on getting through college, I have also read your story and was surprised by how much you have written, as for what I think about it, I believe you are giving too much information about the cast and the story, also the name of your main character is a bit too long and I thought there was a reason for it but in your story you didn't even make her use her full name, I understand that this may be your first story, but learn to hold back in making characters, I understand that you would want to make your character OP or strong or something like that, but that would make the story very one sided and less impactful for the readers, also it isn't important to give very accurate descriptions of every character for it would give them the sense of mystery, especially since you are making a pokemon story, most people reading them would already know what you are referring to, and lastly it would be best if you make most chapters short or medium length, since I expected the background story to be short it turned out to be quite long and discouraged me to continue reading, there may be others who enjoy long chapters, but the common problem I saw in your story is the overload of information, So just focus on giving the important information you want the readers to know and not everything you want since it makes your story too predictable, As for voting your story, I must apologize and say I will not be voting, I would only vote a story if I believe it was really good and I was really entertained by it, hence I let my readers decide if they want to vote or not, and I also don't keep a reading list since I don't access wattpad everyday and would only go in to write stories which I'm abstaining for now, I hope you find my advice useful and won't hate me for not voting
