@konoha108 No problem I've been like searching for really just good content and it's been so hard. But I read yours and I was like, "This is good, this is very good" (Hercules reference). You have good writing skills, I really appreciate the syntax. Obviously there are typos but it's wattpad, who doesn't have typos? I have typos. But some people just don't even know simple grammar and think that it's ok to put dialogue not in quotations but just to bold it. I mean let me see some effort! You have effort in your cover, your writing and plot. It's unique (a bit quick in pace for my taste) but it's got so much going for it. I'm really looking forward to reading it.