Reapershallow

The winter draws near, but before it starts I'm leaving you all with a chapter that I am very proud of. It will be my longest chapter yet, with a bit of backstory for our new admiral. I wanted to highlight the effect of his brain surgery and recent events on his mental state. Spartans are usually stone faced, and unnerved in the face of challenges. But they are still human. Remember, we are all human, and it is ok to fall. We must simply learn to pick ourselves back up, and press on. Discover hope for yourself, and lead others towards tomorrow.

Reapershallow

The winter draws near, but before it starts I'm leaving you all with a chapter that I am very proud of. It will be my longest chapter yet, with a bit of backstory for our new admiral. I wanted to highlight the effect of his brain surgery and recent events on his mental state. Spartans are usually stone faced, and unnerved in the face of challenges. But they are still human. Remember, we are all human, and it is ok to fall. We must simply learn to pick ourselves back up, and press on. Discover hope for yourself, and lead others towards tomorrow.

REVENANT_B328

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Howdy Reaper. I'm just doing a mental health check on you. I hope life is treating you better than me because it recently fucked me sideways with sandpaper.
          
          So how are you 

Reapershallow

@REVENANT_B328. Are YOU doing ok? That was kinda graphic, but I chuckled. I'm not doing too bad. Work looks like it'll be interesting today, a coworker already got into an argument with one of the salesmen so that should be fun. Aside from that I'm pushing along like a stubborn krogan with the next chapter, so expect a long one.
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Reapershallow

Alliances was not finished, i am working on it while working using the App and did not mean to publish it yet. it ends ubbruptly because it is not finished, and I have unpublished it for the time being

Galm-2

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A true “Fuck it we ball” moment
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REVENANT_B328

Hey, Reaper, just out of curiosity, the latest chapter (alliance) seems to end quite abruptly.  Was that on purpose? Or did Wattpad do a stupid again? 

SonicJoe88

So I heard The Spartan Effect story is based on Spectre 117… Looks nice. 

Reapershallow

@SonicJoe88, I took partial inspiration from it, along with a few other stories. Reading them, and seeing what others did to bring the universes together gave me the courage to try it myself.
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REVENANT_B328

Howdy Reaper, i just wanted to bring this to your attention, it may only be on my end,
          I got the notification that you've uploaded a new chapter (checkpoint alpha) it seems as if it doesn't want to work.
          
          Ever time attempt to open it, just fails to bring it up and prompts me with a failed to load. 

REVENANT_B328

@Reapershallow oh. 
            Apologies for the inconvenience
            Can't wait to see the finished work. 
            
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Reapershallow

@REVENANT_B328 it was an error on my end, the next chapter is not done yet.
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MACV-SOG

Good to know im not the only one that’s getting the notification
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REVENANT_B328

Howdy Reaper.
          
          Just read through the latest chapter.
          Damn was in good, Also you nailed joker's personality and his way of speech down to a T man, it's impressive.
          
          If i may voice my opinion on the choices shepherd made.
          
          Personally I'd love to see that Ashley survived. But Kaidan is also a cool dude, soo I'm kinda indifferent. On that
          
          As for the Rachni queen I'd prefer she live in this story if possible.
          
          So that my two-cents.
          Whish you the best. 

REVENANT_B328

@REVENANT_B328 I do so apologize for the botched writing on the message above. 
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