For your books, you can add a lot of drama. Like bullies, family members, abuses, and animals. But that is just something I like in books. But you have to remember not to rush your work. Like saying it's the beginning of school, then turns straight to the end of the day. I seem to have the problem that I put the main problem of the book at the beginning, do I suggest you do better than me. Don't forget it has to make sense, you can't say somthing that nobody understands. Once you are done your chapter, don't forget to check over your work so it looks good and is readable. So... I hope you have less of a writers block, so good luck and let people correct you if you have to make it more interesting, you should listen. And if they are being just down right mean, don't let them drag you down.
