Rebelbabyjenner

Uploaded a new chapter to "Dolce's Game." Enjoy~.
          	
          	I also revised the previous chapter by adding a bit more scenes and changed up the dialogue, giving things more context as I felt it was indeed rushed.
          	
          	Also, I apologize for having not updated this story in a long, long time, as I had been spending these past few months on finding a new place to live. Thankfully the hard part is over and now I'm focusing on getting myself settled in so chapter updates may be a bit slow.
          	
          	Thanks for still keeping up on my works, feedback is always good and helpful. Hope you all are safe and doing good out there~!

Bunnybunch206

Hello Rebel~! I know It's gonna be a bit random when I ask you this, however, I was wondering if me and you could do a role play sometime (whilst I'm using a character for one of the stories im working) simply as a form of fun and as a way for me to get practice my story writing skills, if that's okay with you? :)

Bunnybunch206

You don't have to apologise for your delay with the message ~! Honestly, I understand that you're probably very busy a lot of the time so it's no problem to me :)
            
            Also, thanks for out checking out my first prompt for the roleplay ~! In a bit, I'm gonna go through with writing another prompt so that you can put your own afterwards ~! (I was just wanted to put in a cool intro for it first to truly start it all off, you know? Lol)
            
            In regards to your side note, on the other hand, things regarding characters and all that are fine when it comes to me. It's just me knowing what to write at times for my stories and how to format them overall, that's what I'm really struggling with most of the time. And as for how I want E-Agent 713 to grow as a character in this roleplay, I would love for him to accept that not everyone will view him and his albinism as a freakish thing, to, overall, love himself more in terms of his appearance, allow himself to form close bonds with people again, and show his emotions more genuinely without hiding them (He does grow in a few other areas as well in his actual story, however, they won't be addressed in our role play as I believe they're considered unimportant for it).
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Rebelbabyjenner

@Bunnybunch206 Hi! Sorry for the delay --Yep checked out the link and saw what you wrote!
            
            If you want, you can add on another prompt if you'd like--it will give me a better understanding of where to go from there.
            
            But side-note-- is there anything you're curious about improving on, story or character-wise? What or how would you like how to see your character grow?
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Bunnybunch206

@Bunnybunch206 Sent my first prompt in the comment section of the book~! (Hope it's not too long or formal for you or the story, lol!)
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Bunnybunch206

Hey Rebelbabyjenner! 
          
          I know it's been a while since I sent you any messages, however, I would to take some advice from you, regarding storywriting and that (Due to the fact that you're a great author, after all)
          
          You see, I keep having loads of problems with my own books (Most of which are all original stories) as I keep on struggling to keep on top with them, having issues that involve me not knowing how to write Chapters out,  keep adding too much to my sentences and making paragraphs too big, ecectera, and I really want them to less of a problem for me (particularly because they're a lot harder for me to deal with as I have Autism and all) so that story writing can become a lot more easier for me to carry out (Because I really do like story writing, you see).
          
          I really don't want to be an individual who gets my inspiration from Ai as I don't want to be that type of writer and I really want to get my own original story concepts out on this website, however, due to the way things have been for me, it's been impossible for me to do that.
          
          So, if you can, could you please, please, PLEASE, get in touch with me and provide me some tips that could ease me of my burdens (And inform me of any apps that you have used to make your story-building life easier, if you've used any) as it will be greatly appreciated.
          
          Thank you :)

Rebelbabyjenner

@Bunnybunch206 Hi Bunny!
            
            Happy to help with what limited experience I have! 
            
            Definitely take your time brainstorming and writing--patience is key. And it's always great to be able to produce your own original stuff so best of luck to you with that! 
            
            As for me--I actually received a similar comment like yours on A03 regarding "Dolce's Game." (Didn't realize ppl still found it so engaging even after a year lol~.)
            
            
            So I do have the first quart done, but since the fan fic does borrow elements from the actual game, I was debating whether or not to continue writing without in-game details or or just go-off doing my own thing--their response was practically do whatever I feel like, but definitely don't feel pressured or forced to push out a chapter I won't be happy about. (And I do agree with their statement.)
            
            So don't worry, I haven't abandoned or forgotten about it . (I wasn't kidding about brainstorming storybeats, even I have blocks that half me from writing out a chapter I'll be proud of. )
            
            But let me know what you think, and thanks so much for your interest and enthusiasm for "Dolce's Game" Bunny. 
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Bunnybunch206

Sorry for another late reply ~!
            
            Thank you so much for sending me your two-parter!
            
            Just checked it out now and, once again, I want to thank you so much for telling me what you do when it comes to you doing your story writing ~! It really goes to show just how nice of a person you truly are :)
            
            Like with your one-parter, I will definitely do my best to apply the feedback you've given me and will reach out to a couple other authors to get more advice as I do know a few others who are actually quite good!
            
            Who knows? Hopefully, with your bit of advice and the help I might get from other writers, I will finally be able to release my own original stories [The main one I currently want to get released is about an albino spy by the way, just to let you know] that you can check out, though, that's if you want to, of course. {heh!}
            
            Speaking of stories, I know this may be totally random, but I really want to know when the next chapter of your fanfic is coming out as I've been eagerly waiting for another update since it's been over a year since you last made one, and when you're going to release more art of it as I think it's really good and have enjoyed looking at it :)
            
            [If it's because you've had stuff going on in your own personal life, I will totally understand that by the way~!]
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ProstoTwo2

Hello! Do you remember how we started RP?  So, I think that I finally rethought that AU of mine, so I'm ready to continue. But I'm afraid that we'll have to start over, because I don't like how I started the story in rush. And I also lost access to that account...

ProstoTwo2

@Rebelbabyjenner I wrote it, I suppose.
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Rebelbabyjenner

@ProstoTwo2 Premise looks good. And I've actually begun writing the next chapter of my main story too. Would you like to write the first prompt of the RP?
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Rebelbabyjenner

@ProstoTwo2 Nice~! I'll go check it out after my work shift!
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Rebelbabyjenner

Uploaded a new chapter to "Dolce's Game." Enjoy~.
          
          I also revised the previous chapter by adding a bit more scenes and changed up the dialogue, giving things more context as I felt it was indeed rushed.
          
          Also, I apologize for having not updated this story in a long, long time, as I had been spending these past few months on finding a new place to live. Thankfully the hard part is over and now I'm focusing on getting myself settled in so chapter updates may be a bit slow.
          
          Thanks for still keeping up on my works, feedback is always good and helpful. Hope you all are safe and doing good out there~!

Rebelbabyjenner

Been thinking about re-tweaking my latest chapter of "Dolce's Game." (Received some good critical feedback and I do agree / have been aware--it definitely feels a bit rushed so I might add a few more story bits to it and touch up on some dialogue. Will let those interested know if / once changes are complete.)

Rebelbabyjenner

Uploaded a new chapter to "Dolce's Game." Enjoy~.
          
          I know it's been a long while since I've posted any chapters in this AU, but it definitely sucks big time when you wanna work on writing a story but Writer's Block hits you hard and you're left without ideas to write anything.   -_-'