Red8Lonewolf

I just wanted to ramble about the changes in my amour fanfic.
          	
          	The first change was removing the prelude chapter.
          	Combining two chapters into one was my first thought, but after some experimenting, the second was combining two chapters. I decided to change the entire story story and plot progression.
          	For the first chapter, I thought of introducing Katsumi/Crimson, starting with his insecure and secretive sides, through a conversation with Owlwood, the second in command for Team Sky. If you don't know Team Sky, the mention of MandJTV may clarify where Team Sky is from.
          	Then start with Olympia and her apprentices' side of the story, then jump to Ash and the group's side. Then ends with a humorous moment with Clemont and his Father, Mayer.
          	This a simple and brief way of explaining this even I who wrote this can't explain all the changes.
          	https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Xk3kpqFfkCO42tXNClmcLnMuR0qUoQAVItEJDA0_e4/edit?usp=sharing
          	Anyone curious about what it originally looked like here is the first draft I published.

Red8Lonewolf

I just wanted to ramble about the changes in my amour fanfic.
          
          The first change was removing the prelude chapter.
          Combining two chapters into one was my first thought, but after some experimenting, the second was combining two chapters. I decided to change the entire story story and plot progression.
          For the first chapter, I thought of introducing Katsumi/Crimson, starting with his insecure and secretive sides, through a conversation with Owlwood, the second in command for Team Sky. If you don't know Team Sky, the mention of MandJTV may clarify where Team Sky is from.
          Then start with Olympia and her apprentices' side of the story, then jump to Ash and the group's side. Then ends with a humorous moment with Clemont and his Father, Mayer.
          This a simple and brief way of explaining this even I who wrote this can't explain all the changes.
          https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Xk3kpqFfkCO42tXNClmcLnMuR0qUoQAVItEJDA0_e4/edit?usp=sharing
          Anyone curious about what it originally looked like here is the first draft I published.

Red8Lonewolf

Hey guys everyone following my fanfic Dernière Danse (One Last Dance). I unpublished chapter one for a quick rewrite of the chapters, Prelude and Self-assurance which will be combined into one chapter called Émotions du passé.

Red8Lonewolf

I wanted tell everyone about my pokemon team for pokemon shield. 
          Score the cinderace
          Moves:
          U-turn
          Low Kick
          Gunk Shot
          Pyro Ball
          
          Kurama the alolan ninetales
          Moves:
          Dazzling Gleam
          Dark Pulse
          Blizzard
          Extrasensory
          
          Some Japanese name(which I don't know) Daragapult
          Moves:
          Dragon Darts
          Thunder
          Flamethrower
          Phantom Force
          
          Secptielus the sceptile
          Moves:
          Leaf Blade
          Throat Chop
          Outrage
          
          Lycanroc midnight form
          Move
          Counter
          Stone Edge
          Low sweep
          Throat Chop
          
          Excalibur the aegislash
          Moves
          Night Slash
          King's Shield
          Swords Dance
          Sacred Sword

Red8Lonewolf

for the sceptile the fourth move is detect (because ash's sceptile made it look cool)
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