Red8Lonewolf

https://www.wattpad.com/1477443554-derni%C3%A8re-danse-one-last-dance-onhold-flammes
          	
          	I have finally finished chapter 2 and this rewrite seems to be doing well.

Red8Lonewolf

For you guys following my Amourshippong fanfic, Dernière Danse (One Last Dance). I have a new idea I wanted to try out in the form of a draft. Because I wanted to try out a new type of story so I can get more Ideas for this fanfic.

Red8Lonewolf

I just wanted to ramble about the changes in my amour fanfic.
          
          The first change was removing the prelude chapter.
          Combining two chapters into one was my first thought, but after some experimenting, the second was combining two chapters. I decided to change the entire story story and plot progression.
          For the first chapter, I thought of introducing Katsumi/Crimson, starting with his insecure and secretive sides, through a conversation with Owlwood, the second in command for Team Sky. If you don't know Team Sky, the mention of MandJTV may clarify where Team Sky is from.
          Then start with Olympia and her apprentices' side of the story, then jump to Ash and the group's side. Then ends with a humorous moment with Clemont and his Father, Mayer.
          This a simple and brief way of explaining this even I who wrote this can't explain all the changes.
          https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Xk3kpqFfkCO42tXNClmcLnMuR0qUoQAVItEJDA0_e4/edit?usp=sharing
          Anyone curious about what it originally looked like here is the first draft I published.

Red8Lonewolf

Hey guys everyone following my fanfic Dernière Danse (One Last Dance). I unpublished chapter one for a quick rewrite of the chapters, Prelude and Self-assurance which will be combined into one chapter called Émotions du passé.