Hello! I'm an avid fantasy reader, and your story caught my interest. I would really like to read it!
I did notice that the chapters are uploaded as one large paragraph. I found it a little difficult to follow because of that.
If it's possible, would you consider separating the chapters into paragraphs, especially around dialogue and scene changes? I think it would make the story much easier to read.
I hope you don't take this the wrong way, I'm only suggesting it because I'd love to start reading your story. Thank you for considering it, and I wish you the best with your writing!
