RedBallpen5841

@Dark_Empress Chapter one is a piece of crap already. It never holds my interest, so why bother wasting my time on reading up to the last one? The plot is predictable and so is your flawless/cliché characters, what's there to feel interested? 
          	
          	Why don't you challenge yourself and edit you work rather than hiding to your shame and anger? Haven't you read my post on your wall? Or you just ignore it just like any other young writers here?

KenthenaAthenji

...haha..'NO TRASH IS ALLOWED HERE' and 'IMMATURE READER'..bakit tinamaan ka?
          
          
          ..anyway kung mag rereply ka sa i'm afraid mukhang di ko mababasa ng medyo matagal-tagal na panahon..hehe..i'm very busy person to waste my time...mga 3 months from now ko mababasa ang commment mo kung sakali man lang..

KenthenaAthenji

@RedBallpen5841 tss...i could only say 3 thing 4 you...
          
          1.) kahit namn ata 'gasgas' na ang isang linya ko.. you still need to know the REAL MEANING behind those words kung anu talagang mga pinapahiwatig ko,ryt?... 
          2.)PREP ako? hahaha...haha...mali ata ang inference view mo sakin..haha 'MASTERAL DEGREE?'  your really out of my league..
          3.)gurl brokenhearted ka? kulang ka kasi ng APPRECIATION...i think yan ang kulang sayo eh...and i think you really need to learn how to appreciate things....or napalaki lang ata nainum mong kape...masyado kang BITTER..try to put some more sugar to your coffee...y'now just an advice...if you don't need them..just pretend you didn't read them..
          
          
          oh' 1 more thing...i'm sure nung bata ka rin madalas lumipad ang utak mo..y'know IMAGINATION..i'm sure you also experienced having a fiction stories like Dark_Empress' story,,sabi mo sa last comment mo sakin you had stories too kaya sure akong bata ka pa gumagawa ka na rin ng story na may pagka IMPERFECT..appreciate other stories just like when you apreciate yours when you were in their age

RedBallpen5841

@Dark_Empress Chapter one is a piece of crap already. It never holds my interest, so why bother wasting my time on reading up to the last one? The plot is predictable and so is your flawless/cliché characters, what's there to feel interested? 
          
          Why don't you challenge yourself and edit you work rather than hiding to your shame and anger? Haven't you read my post on your wall? Or you just ignore it just like any other young writers here?

RedBallpen5841

@KenthenaAthenji How sure are you na bagong member ako? Sa date na nakalagay sa profile? So, bago ka lang din? Bakit ganyan ka makareact? 
          
          Manners? NO TRASH ALLOWED? Bakit nandito ka?
          
          I am bashing Dark_Empress' story, not DarkPrincess17.  At ginamit mo pa talaga yung gasgas na linyang 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder' na yan. Sige nga, paki-explain kung anong nangyari sa 'PAK!' 'BOGHS' 'SIPA' 'SUNTOK'  na yan, at kung majority ng mga readers nya ay nalaman kung saan tinamaan, kung gaano kasakit o kahit ang transition na lang ng galaw, mag-aapologize ako sa author ngayon din.
          
          At mababaw ang imagination? Immature reader? Alam mo ba kung anong mga binabasa ko? Hindi ang mga katulad mong nakuntento lang sa basura, sa bookshelves ako kumukuha ng materials. Even if your so-called 'concept' is good (I highly doubt it), kung poor naman ang writing style, isusuka lang din yan ng matatalinong tao. By the way, I could guess the age bracket of her readers. They're aged 11-16. Mga shallow-minded, hormone-ruled children who seeks perfection towards their future mate pero hindi nila alam na walang perpektong tao. Ayokong magbasa ng material na nagtuturo ng mali. At paano ko nalaman? Sa paggamit ng capslock, dami ng exclamation points at kung ano anong pinaghalong punctuation marks. 
          
          Siguro prep ka pa lang pero ako nasa masteral na, so don't even think about how 'insecure' I am. You don't know who Red is. Malay mo nabasa mo na pala ang gawa ko, hindi mo lang pala alam.

KenthenaAthenji

          sorry po kung manghihimasukan lang po ha..pero po kasi parang sa ibang dako na ng mundo ang pinuntahan nyu sa mga NEGATIVE comments na binitawan nyu...
          
          sinasabi ko lang po na dito sa wattpad walang ganyanan..kong meron mang magbibigay ng mga negative comments  dianadaan yan sa PRIVATE MESSAGE --> alam nyu na siguro yan ryt?
          
          kaka-scan ko lang sa profile mo at mukhang bagong member ka lang dito sa wattpad kaya kung pwede gamitin mo yung salitang MANNERS sa ibang tao..i'm sure naturuan ka nyan dahil kung hindi ngayon palang po sinasabi ko nang 'NO TRASH IS ALLOWED HERE' 
          
          according naman po sa story ni DarkPrincess17 kanya-kanyang trip yan..alam nyu naman po ang salitang 'FICTION' di ba? sana naman po narealize nyo na 'BEAUTY IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER' may kanya-kanya po tayong pananaw sa buhay...
          
          ang kinukuha po sa story ay  yung 'CONCEPT' ng author..kung di mo makuha ang konsepto nung taga-sulat...that means mababaw pa ang imagination mo..that means your still an 'IMMATURE READER'
          
          don't worry this is not my true account..just reply if you're real INSECURE to DarkPrincess17...