Red_Hyoudou

Logged in just to say Ash and Pikachu’s 25 years of adventure is going to end. 

Red_Hyoudou

@theend599 I don't really know myself. I am kind of lost with the story because I didn't plan anything like What's going to happen next, When is this gonna pop up, when will this happen in the story, etc. I kind of wondered away where the story really needs to go and I was still new at writing at that time. I may re-write it like my other book. Thank you for understanding.

Red_Hyoudou

Just noticed that I'm already at 2000+ words in Chapter 12 but it's not even near the end the chapter. Huh, how strange. Should I shorten it?

Red_Hyoudou

@gogolarkar hmm, I guess you're right. I kinda get what you mean with the natural flow because if I shorten it, it will feel like the whole chapter is forced and I might leave plot holes here and there.
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gogolsarkar

@Red_Hyoudou No. Continue writing with natural flow.
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RedandAsh

I would like to thank you

Red_Hyoudou

Oh. Well you're welcome mate!
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RedandAsh

For getting me hooked on wattpad 
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Red_Hyoudou

 Uhm, for what?
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JamesOwO

@Red_Hyoudou Yep. Im done reading betrayal story of Ash. Plot is the same and I lost my interest last year. I just cant stand it anymore. 
          Author will just take the same plot and milk it over and over again.
          But there some betrayal stories that just take the idea of hurt and dark which then turn into a masterpieces. 
          
          Overall, just make a new Pokemon story. I move to BNHA Fan Fic cuz I just read a same plot every single day.