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If anyone is reading my story I reviewed the plot in my head last night and made a small, but important add on. This is now part of Riley's description: "She and Melody also had another connection. The same fire that killed Melody and Avery's parents and siblings had killed Riley's single dad as he tried to put it out."

I just slightly changed Avery's looks. Here's his description now: "He was slim and looked like his sister except for his ever so slightly lighter skin and shoulder length hair that he liked to keep in short ponytail on top of his head. He had died the tips a dark teal color and when it was pulled up, it  revealed slightly pointed, elf-like ears."

Yay!!! I finished chapter two for anyone reading my story. (I honestly think all my views might just be me reading and rereading my story and being too much of a perfectionist but to anyone actually reading it here it is!)

@Melon_Collie Hai!