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Here’s the ending that was planned for the PayJay fic if your interested:
As the guilt caught up to Paper for the murder of OJ, he trusts in LoseLeaf to get him out of the situation. Paper believes that the other half didn’t intend to kill but rather it was instinct.
When Loseleaf gets full control of the body he doesn’t go do anything to make up for the murder he caused, instead slowly taking out people that he didn’t like or that he thought knew. This would’ve included; Pickle, Knife leading to Mic, Trophy from a bad encounter going to Cheesy and Soap. The streak would’ve ended with him trying to kill Nickel and being caught by Ballon. Ballon was able to get away and Loseleaf would’ve been found out.
This could’ve ended 2 ways though,
1: Loseleaf falls down the stairs while chasing after Ballon and Paper wakes up in Testubes lab. He’s been in a coma since the first section when the hallucination appeared and OJ found him.
2: Loseleaf gets fully caught and forced to give Paper back his place and he has to deal with the consequences of Loseleafs actions.
I really liked the idea of the fic, but with the comic and everything. I just have too much on my plate. But, if you like the writing of this, you’ll probably enjoy the writing of my webcomic.