Redboi725

Hey everyone it's been so crazy I barely even have time to read the stories what I started to read. Hell I barely have time to even write chapters. I really need to get back into reading and writing again.

Redboi725

Hey guys it's been crazy I barely have anytime to do something these days. I'm taking a break for now. I didn't like how I ended Lyfe but I'm in need a of break so I can regroup. But thanks to all my followers and readers. I appreciate you all for reading my book. Just have to find the time to start passion of the cross.

Redboi725

Thanks a lot guys my book "LYFE" hit 1k, I'm so excited I'm glad you guys enjoying it. It was my first and it's surely not going to be my last. I'm sorry I haven't updated the final chapter due to my work hours and me being tired but I will start that final chapter and try to finish those  intros for "HOLY PASSION". Thanks a lot everyone really appreciate it

Redboi725

Hey sorry guys been going through a personal storm. But I'm coming up for air so now my goal is to finish this story so I can maybe start a new one. maybe something I might have experienced or witnessed. I'll figure out once I'm done with "Lyfe".

Redboi725

Can someone give me some bxb stories that are interesting and chapters that are more than 30. I need some new material to read. Thanks

Redboi725

Yeah this my first time writing. And was trying my best to do the corrections myself but I tend to get busy and don't have time. I've been reading a lot and some stories were just to predictable for me and I don't want that. I want something that when you read it, you gasp for air or put the book down and grab a glass of wine. But thanks for the criticism really appreciate it
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anseldeangelo

The concept of the story is promising, but just put more effort into the sentence structure, and correcting grammatical errors. Remember to always use quotation marks whenever a character is speaking. That's very important. You can pick up some more skills by reading more, and paying attention to the techniques used by authors. Besides that, your story is good.
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Redboi725

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