Hello everyone, Hello babies.
I know it's been a while and I'm grateful that most of you liked and loved this novel even though it's a little bit cringe. Now, I'm reflecting if I'll continue my plan or what. Here's what's in my mind.
1st, it's a bit outdated. The writing style and flow doesn't matched the current state of the novel. I'm planning to fix this and have a consistent writing style.
2nd, the age of characters are inappropriate. They're minors huhuhu. I'm planning to move it from high school settings to college settings.
3rd, Kyle's plot. I want to be more consistent and careful to the Kyle's character. Rawr.
4rd, Brent character is not enough. I'll add some roughness. When I said roughness, more blood and fist.
5th, emphasizing Blake's "sa'yo ko lang 'to naramdaman, Kyle." character. Blake deserve that lap dance, I'll add more.
6th, Greg and Cristine personality. I want to give them more build up. Not like they popped out of nowhere.
7th, the build up of characters and sudden removal. I want my character to be consistent. I'm not changing the personality and dynamic of characters, I just want them to have their own spotlight and build up.
8th, there's unnecessary chapters. I'm planning to have a straightforward story with a numerous plot twist that you're craving. Probably, 20k words are enough each chapter.
9th, I want it to be more dark and matured. When I said dark, you know it baby.
That's all.
