RedvelvetKoko

New Chapter of Twisted Savior Complex OUT!!!!

RedvelvetKoko

Mha had so much potential that i love making characters for it but like hate having to write it out. 
          
          I made a character that is basically in a rehabilitaion program, but he's also being charged with parentcide. But he himself claims that his mother died from his Quirk Manisfestation. Mind you he's . And Quirks usualy appear at age four. But the police aint buying it and throw in into a rehabilitation program because they thing he's crazy. Because the neighbors know him and his mom and know he has issues. 
          
          So the story is like him being an unreliable narrarator. You want to believe him. That it was just his Quirk Manifesting, but there's just so many peoplenjust like no. This dude is completely crazy. 
          
          So crazy MC who turns into a villain. Who may or may not have a quirk.

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@RedvelvetKoko Holy shit,tiene un monton de base para ser historiaza
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RedvelvetKoko

I'm about to capitalize a lot about that ‘passing abilities’ rule in Bsd. So does that mean well-known families can pass that power to their children to keep the legacy strong so that they don't die with the power?? Does it have to be family? (I forgot if it was stated in the manga) Can someone have two abilities??? One passed down to them and the other from their own. Do passed down abilities (Kyoka's) or abilities tied down to the soul / manufactured (Atsushi / Chuuya) all have limits and drawbacks. Since Kyoka used to be her ability can be ordered through a phone. Atsushi couldn't control his. And Chuuya can control arahabaki when he uses it. Are there more manufactured abilities?? Is there prejudice against people with abilities?? How rare are they?? Why is the government not more strict with them?? 
          These are the things I question and wish bsd capitalized on. And I am going to insert in Twisted Savior Complex.

RedvelvetKoko

I'm about to capitalize a lot about that ‘passing abilities’ rule in Bsd. So does that mean well-known families can pass that power to their children to keep the legacy strong so that they don't die with the power?? Does it have to be family? (I forgot if it was stated in the manga) Can someone have two abilities??? One passed down to them and the other from their own. Do passed down abilities (Kyoka's) or abilities tied down to the soul / manufactured (Atsushi / Chuuya) all have limits and drawbacks. Since Kyoka used to be her ability can be ordered through a phone. Atsushi couldn't control his. And Chuuya can control arahabaki when he uses it. Are there more manufactured abilities?? Is there prejudice against people with abilities?? How rare are they?? Why is the government not more strict with them?? 
          These are the things I question and wish bsd capitalized on. And I am going to insert in Twisted Savior Complex.

RedvelvetKoko

Thinking about a Reverse!AU of Twisted Savior Complex where Keiko lives, but Kaito dies (Because I can't imagine Keiko pulling the same stunts pulling Kaito did to keep him alive). Dazai comes up the mountain and Keiko convinces Dazai to take her with him. (Because of his ability that he reveals to her. I want them to have a sibling relationship. Because I firmly believe if Dazai met Keiko before the Plague hit her he would generally see what Kaito in fact saw in her, not that Keiko didn't have any flaws. Which I'm excited to reveal as the chapters go on. Because Kaito just talks and thinks about her. But he's only seeing her through a colored lens and refuses to question the things she does and says. Not that she's way worse than Kaito). Dazai and her would have the somewhat healthy relationship Kaito and Keiko were to have meant (because Dazai is Dazai). I feel like Keiko's place in the story will either be in the lower ranks where she meets Odasaku or take Higuchi's place (love her she still exists in this universe). But unlike Kaito she's not suited for this life and is not going to be that close to Mori like Kaito was. So she leaves the Mafia. She leaves when Double Black is practically at its peak. Dazai is confused. Wondering why she left him (he still has Odasaku, but he can't help that bitter feeling. Because where Oda was like a friend. She was generally like an older sister to him) . She works underground for a while until she meets this female doctor (*cough Yosano) and joins the ADA as a desk worker. 
          
          I was thinking about her having an ability. Maybe. But if she was it would be an extreme future sight (which is ironic considering Oda) but she literally can't tell if it is past, present, or future. Because they come to her at random times and could happen from a span of a second to like ten years ahead. It gets under control because of Fukuzawa (I think that's his name ability) but they still feel like fever dreams to her.