Reffster

Okay, after much dithering and procrastination, and a moderate amount of word-jitsu, I have finished editing Manticore Rampant. It's gained a few thousand words and I've split the final chapter into two and given the whole thing a bit of a polish, and I'd like to think it's now a more complete, coherent story (but then I would think that, wouldn't I?).
          	
          	Although they don't share any characters, this story takes place in the same 'universe' as my earlier novel The Blade, and I suspect it's a universe to which I will return at some point. I tend to have fun there.
          	
          	Anyway, happy weekend, people.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1496102523-manticore-rampant-ch-16-a-kingdom-blindsided
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/362560254-manticore-rampant

Reffster

Okay, after much dithering and procrastination, and a moderate amount of word-jitsu, I have finished editing Manticore Rampant. It's gained a few thousand words and I've split the final chapter into two and given the whole thing a bit of a polish, and I'd like to think it's now a more complete, coherent story (but then I would think that, wouldn't I?).
          
          Although they don't share any characters, this story takes place in the same 'universe' as my earlier novel The Blade, and I suspect it's a universe to which I will return at some point. I tend to have fun there.
          
          Anyway, happy weekend, people.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1496102523-manticore-rampant-ch-16-a-kingdom-blindsided
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362560254-manticore-rampant

adultfictionstories

@Reffster Hi there, just a gentle reminder. Our records show you still have one task to complete before the next Snatching Party.
          Kind regards AFBC

Reffster

@adultfictionstories Whoops. I have done it, just forgot to say so. Thanks for the reminder.
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Reffster

Okay, so the 2024 edition of the Open Novella Contest has come and gone and, in what is bordering on a tradition, my decision to enter resulted in the complete derailment of the book I was writing at the time. What is less traditional, however, is that this time I actually did manage to write a novella (rather than a fully fledged novel or a sad, little abandoned proto-book). Huzzah? Well, kind of.
          
          You see, I feel like there's the germ of a good story in my novella (eww, germs).  But I didn't feel like I'd done it justice. Part of the issue was the constrained nature of the ONC and part was my own lack of clarity as to what I was trying to say. In any case, the characters were a little too thinly sketched for my liking and the plot not as coherent as I wanted it to be.
          
          Anyway, the point is that I have decided to fix it. Whether this is out of a strict adherence to upholding authorial standards or simply a means to dodge restarting my other book, I'm trying hard not to speculate. I have thus far edited probably two-thirds of the thing, adding another 3-4k words (including a new chapter) in the process, and I hope to have it (re-)finished within a couple of weeks. After that, perhaps I will restart my other book. Who knows? Stranger things have happened.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362560254-manticore-rampant

Reffster

I don't do too many recommendations, but if you enjoy quality cerebral sci-fi, check out this ONC entry:-
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362592863-i-fell-from-the-dark
          
          I'm glad I did.

Reffster

@theidiotmachine You're very welcome. I hope it might help some others to discover your excellent story. Best of luck in the comp.
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theidiotmachine

@Reffster oh wow what an amazing complement to wake up to! Thank you so much!
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Reffster

So, after the best part of four years, with 'Manticore Rampant' I've once again been able to click 'complete' on a story. Feels pretty good, I have to say.
          
          It's my first completed novella (after my previous two attempts turned into fully fledged novels when I wasn't looking) and the first story to also take place in the same universe as 'The Blade' (albeit for an adult audience and without any characters or settings in common).
          
          The four non-complete-clicking years still contained plenty of writing, along with lots of editing and some dabblings in the real publishing world, so were far from a bust, but I am keen to click that button more regularly from here on in. Next cab off the rank is 'Section F: The Arse-Kickers', and then maybe, just maybe, it will be time to aim for the fabled and scarcely comprehendible completion of The Four Baristas: Double Shot. We shall see.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362560254-manticore-rampant

Reffster

@GlenMaddock Wow, bummer. Crossing my fingers for you.
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GlenMaddock

Kidneys failing as usual I’m on start list for dialysis and transplant 
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Reffster

@GlenMaddock Hey, thanks. Nice to hear from you, hope you're going well.
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Reffster

Hmm. Weirdly, the Wattpad gremlins decided to remove all the em-dashes from the last chapter I published (and replace them with hyphens). For a serial em-dash over-user like me, this is no small issue. Also, the chapter order (for Manticore Rampant) got spontaneously rearranged. Literary poltergeists?

Reffster

@inkwellheart It's all a conspiracy by big punctuation.
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inkwellheart

@Reffster dang hyphen lobby. Just as bad as the egg council...
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Reffster

@inkwellheart So, definitely not just me. I suspect undue and illicit influence from the hyphen lobby...
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Reffster

The 14th and final chapter of my ONC story, Manticore Rampant:-
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1441601437-manticore-rampant-ch-14-manticore-repentant
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362560254-manticore-rampant
          
          This one nearly melted my brain. There is a LOT going on.
          
          I'll spend the next day or so ironing out any little glitches and then submit the sucker for the good judges' consideration.
          
          I may whack an epilogue on the end, but that will be purely for fun, won't have any bearing on the story and won't be added prior to submission. The novella is complete as is.
          
          Thank you to those hardy few who made it this far, I genuinely appreciate every comment and vote. You are all very awesome.
          
          I've had very little time to read any other entries, but hope to rectify that now  mine is done. Best of luck to everyone who's made it this far.

Reffster

@wxnderland_addict Much appreciated, thanks (and likewise for your story).
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wxnderland_addict

@Reffster congratulations! I hope to check this one out soon, it looks like a lot of fun >:)
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