Dhiya_here
Hey!
I actually wanted your help with something.
I’m feeling a little confused about the storyline of Wounded Wedding. I’ve written the confrontation scene between Khushi and Arnav near the poolside, but it’s different from the show. Now I’m unsure whether the changes make sense or if my writing feels weak.
Could you please give me honest feedback on that part? I’d really appreciate it.
Also, what would be the best way for me to share that section with you?
Dhiya_here
@Reginap2812 Read it :) Thank you again for your detailed feedback! I’m really grateful. I’ve replied to your email..please have a look whenever you’re free.
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