@ReiFive
Truthfully, your book was part of what inspired me to write my book. I loved your story. The villainess lives a good life. The story and world building were amazing. i felt like i was in the story, and i love how clearly each of your male characters was defined. My favorite moment was when paulo went tumbling into the trees. I admire you as an author and a reader. Your book was the best beastworld book I've read so far, and i hope my book can be just as good.
Hi, thank you for reading and liking my books. I appreciate any constructive criticism you have to offer. My next chapter will be out on Wednesday
@__Nightfurry12_ Hi, my pleasure. I'm enjoying it a lot. The flow is perfect to me and the Grammer is so clean that I can read it without anything taking me out of the story. I like the world building and more importantly, the way you chose to go about it. Aside from the story telling bit (That I felt was good anyway) there was no huge exposition bits or info dumps. You give us enough and then we can "see" the rest. Additionally, you were able to convey certain information with little words. Like when you said that the village was well to do because the mother's are good matchmakers. You didn't have to tell the readers that the women care for their sons as more than a means to an end, it can can be inferred from this. Your use of both show and tell is wonderful so far. I could learn a thing or two from the way you do it. The long chapters are such a treat. I feel like I'm really getting a bang for my buck (even though it's free). If I had to nitpick on one thing, it's showing Alan's thoughts too early (imo). The chapter sneak peaks really don't feel necessary. Subjectively, to me at least, it feels like a spoiler I didn't ask for. I'll likely skip these from now on to keep more tension. Which I have to say ... The tension level in this story is great. Only broken by the sneak peaks a little, but overall super. I also enjoy how the side characters were presented. And also how you haven't enfeebled or reduced all the women down to fulfilling one role (not that that's bad to read in other works, I just love the difference). In summary, the highlights I find are: Story flow Immaculate grammar Mc character (wasn't expecting her to be so snappy when pressed. I love it) Flaw (?) Spoilers Please keep up the awesome work. I'm so looking forward to more. :D
@ReiFive i see. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it more than i can say. I plan to stop using spoilers. It too har to pick a piece of the next chapter and honestly feels silly to write. This helped me decide not to use spoilers in the future
Hola solo para decirte que amo todas tus historias y la manera en la que escribes (las descubrí gracias a las traducciones de AbyAby6) y solo pasaba para comentarte lo mucho que las amo, y sigue escribiendo que lo haces muy bien❣️❣️
@roselinnerosier2 aw, thank you for stopping by! ^_^ I'm grateful that AbyAby6 took up the projects and put the time and effort into translating them. I will be keeping at it! :D
I can't believe it's been like 3-4 years since I follow you, lol till this day I still enjoy and love the beast world fic you write, I luv Ur work so much(●♡∀♡)
Hi everyone hi author I hope everyone is good here
Author I love your book
So Yh am writing my first Wattpad story please check it out
It is called My little wife and this is the link
https://www.wattpad.com/story/386011312?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=AdaOne8
Age gap
Mature
Funny
a child brain in an adult body
You guys will like the story please tell a friend to tell a friend
Thank you stay safe n hydrated
You’ve inspired me to start writing my own rom-com story! It’s full of awkward moments, witty banter, and chaos—just how I like it. If you have time, I’d love for you to check it out and maybe even laugh at my ridiculous characters.
Also, thanks for existing—you’re the quirky motivator everyone needs!
I really miss your creative writing. To be honest I've read and re read your novels several times. They are some of my favorites on the Beastworld sub-genre. I would love it if you started something new or continued Drew's story with a part 2. Maybe even Grace and her daughters stories a bit. I mean what happens with Serenity? Does she ever find a mate? Lol even Nana, how did things work out with kids and Elizabeth? Anyway, happy holidays from a huge fan! Wish I could get a pdf copy of your work...
@shawnabowman40 I'm so glad you like them :D I'm working on more chapters for Drew's story. I call them bonus chapters, but they are more like a continuation. Grace's story is complete though. Nana's originally was going to get a book 2, 3, and 4 but I feel like I need to rewrite book 1 after reading it and that makes me hesitate. That, and the mc I had planned for book two makes me adverse to writing it, so I'd need to change my plans for that. In short, I haven't dropped the idea yet, but I have no tentative date to when I'd get around to it.
I have successfully got around wattpad's webpage (which won't load for me at all) and can post the bonus chapter for Drew here!
I'm still cross posting. The version on A03 has more edits too. Mostly clarity, but I've tweaked a few details here and there as well. Nothing big or plot impacting. Just found some parts lacking and tried to fix them up.
Stay tuned. Hope you enjoy :D
Hello and good evening.
I know it's been awhile, but I am still around.
I do see the comments and appreciate them even if I can't respond to them all. :)
I'm trying to get back to writing, but it has been slow going.
I did finally get a bonus chapter for Drew's story done. It does need a 2nd and possibly a 3rd bonus chapter, but it's a start.
Unfortunately, my computer can't be updated any more and I can't access Wattpad from it. So these chapters will be uploaded on A03 along with the whole story, which has also been edited a bit better.
(It is taking a lot of time to get the text formatting right, so I may end up making a second post for just the bonus content.)
Please let me know if there's something you were curious about seeing concluded. I may* be able to include it.
Hope you all have a wonderful rest of your day.
@msmist2 it has been awhile! Hope you are doing well. She is hard to forget. I'm having fun resisting her after all this time. That made me smile. Such a cute joke XD Thank you for the feedback! Hope you also have a great one. :D
@kuroneki :D I agree. In terms of were the stories dropped off, I think Drew's ended way early in the timeline and should at least have a time skip to show what happens in a few years. But there was a lot of content in between that I felt bad about skipping, so I'm stretching it a little more. Okay, I'll include Mitchell. Was kind of thinking to, but haven't decided on how yet. He needs a lot of character development and attention for him to become a potential mate though. At least a mini arc's worth of time and I can't promise that. Hiro and Drew hadn't mated yet in the main story, but I promise that'll be addressed in bonus chapter 1. although, it won't be a spicy scene. You're most welcome! Thank you for all the support. Things are a little bumpy but arguably much better in a lot of ways than before. :-) As for a feral mate... I like the idea, but they'd need a lot more time than I'd probably give to form a relationship. I'd essentially need to to a part 2 book as opposed to bonus chapters for that. I'll see where the writing takes me, but I think it's unlikely. I will keep that in mind however. Thank you for the feedback. ^_^
Is there, any way at all, a possibility that you can make your ff here available for purchase. I really want to download them and put them on a stick. Its more if your account closes down or Wattpad is closing or cancel...something. I just want to make sure i can still read it even in 10 years from now.....please
i will take whatever you give with gratitude. If you at that point will drop a link to your page then my gratitude will be immense. :))
@LisaJudithaIspas hello and good day to you. I cannot lawfully or morally do so. I'd need to obtain express permission from the legal rights holder of the original work to do so, and I cannot find a way to contact them or even who the current rights holder is. However, I plan to put the 4 fanfictions I wrote on AO3 at some point. So they will not be gone even if something happens to Wattpad. Hope that helps :D