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@Reinterest Yea...the beginning needs some work, but I'm at a lost right now on how to fix it. I'm glad you said that about Leila's struggle though - that's what I wanted to focus on. Enjoy the sequel and let me know your thoughts at the end of that one too!

@xDRAG0N0VAx I really enjoyed it. I wasn't sure where it was heading at the beginning. However, as the story unfolded it became a real page turner. An interesting way of showcasing Leila's struggle after David's death and the impact her emotional state has on her personality.

@Reinterest You finished the story; what did you think of it?

@Addicted2Dragons I'm loving the story! The pace of it is great and I keep turning the pages to read what happens next. Keep up the good work.