VARHARARM

hay!!...can you review my story and give feedback on where should i correct it ?...(i saw you in many fantasy stories , thats why :) )

Rejeyn13ch

@VARHARARM Ok, you're welcome, and by the way, I'll continue reading your story, I'm very interested.
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VARHARARM

True answer is i just saw you in one story .., i needed someone to  give a honest review of my story.., and found or saw you in a book and messaged you :) .., thank you for your words and Just 3 ch are out and can we expect to jump into the main story just like that without character development and world building ?.., i mean directly building the apartment without basement... So i am taking my time to give the best.., Wattpad has lots of random stories.., i don't want mine to be a random one .., Soo i will work my neck off to be the best story .
            Thank you for your kind words tho.❤
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