Remnantation

@CMF_Wright Thank you!

@Remnantation :( sad to hear that, but if it feels like the right decision then it's probably for the best. Good luck with your shorter writing projects! :)

@Remnantation No problem! :)

@jessoterick I didn't realize you could unpublish without losing anything! So that's very useful to know, thank you! 
            And for the words of advice! I'm rather torn on it. It's also unfortunate because I had actually submitted it for an award contest and have still been waiting for that to conclude. So I feel a little bad one way or another! But anyways, thanks again!

@Remnantation Hi, Rem! If you think it's the right thing to do for you right now, I'd suggest removing it until you think you're in a good place with it again. I keep pubbing and unpubbing one of mine for similar reasons--I am terribly indecisive. It's really difficult to keep an update schedule, and I'm not 100% confident of anything I post. In any case, do what feels right. Though I recommend just unpublishing it without deleting so you don't lose all your hard-earned reads.

@jessoterick  Thanks! It's an effort, that's for sure.

@Remnantation Glad to have you back! And I know you can do it! We all get stuck sometimes, but you just gotta push through. :)

@AnthonieTaylor I've seen other authors include a "first chapter" dedicated to special words, and some include notes at the end of the chapter. Those options would be better than at the end, especially because it won't help us reading it now. And they work better for digital content - but I'd still recommend trying to weave information in the story instead of an index as much as you can.
            
            For the grammar - it's a PAIN. I agree. And it's hard to know where to start. At the least, check out the program Grammarly, which installs in Word and into your browser (and you can get it free! That version is more basic but still great. I use it too). It will help immensely. Then study why it suggests the changes it does.
            
            I know what it's like to have a project like that and I'm sure you want to get it as perfect as you can! Good luck. And I'm glad if this was helpful!

@AnthonieTaylor Absolutely amazing with the advice you have given me actually remarkable. To throw some context in here I've been working on this world since I was 13 and I see that I have a bad problem with expecting people to know what I know already. I also don't have very good grammar skills when it comes to punctuation and run on sentences/paragraphs. Regarding the language I wanted to take the time and actually write out each word and it's definition in the last "pages" kind of like the Author of Eragon did.  

@AnthonieTaylor Hello! I went ahead and took a look at the two chapters you have posted. I hope you find it helpful! However, I would recommend in the future at least making sure you've got someone's name right when you're asking for help (And if you liked Foxtrot, please feel free to leave some thoughts on it there). 
            
            Thanks for stopping by and good luck with writing!

Wow, thank you! There’s a lot to catch up on but I’ve stopped updating for the time being to focus on getting the story right

@AugustineReverie No problem! I would have left comments but to be honest, I didn't have much to say (And I'm trying to catch up to current chapters, haha)