Ren-Dhoumin

Dear writers:
          	
          	Putting "And also," or, "And plus" in a sentence is just saying "And And," or, "Plus Plus."
          	
          	This does not mean you can not have those words in the same sentences. Let me explain with an example.
          	
          	"Sally would like a sandwich, and she also likes grapes."
          	
          	"Sally would like a sandwich, and she likes grapes too."
          	
          	^ These are incorrect. You basically said "and she and likes grapes." Which makes no sense. It would be grammatically correct if you took out one of the 'in addition' words. So the sentence would read:
          	
          	"Sally would like a sandwich; she also likes grapes."
          	Or
          	"Sally would like a sandwich, and she likes grapes."
          	Or
          	"Sally would like a sandwich; she likes grapes too."
          	
          	^ This is correct. You executed your sentence perfectly and you said what you wanted to say without any confusion or duplication!
          	
          	It's not always that way though. Since English is so high maintenance, It differs depending on the way you place the 'in addition' word.
          	
          	You would not need to change the sentence if it were like this:
          	
          	"Sally would like a sandwich; she also likes grapes and apples."
          	
          	Since 'And' is with a subject, it does not need to be removed. Another example.
          	
          	"Jacob is waiting for Sally at a café. He knows what Sally likes to eat. He also likes sandwiches, apples and grapes." 
          	
          	Be weary of words you put together when they mean the same thing. If not to exaggerate a sentence, it becomes grammatically incorrect and often distracting. 
          	
          	Hope it's not confusing, Lol.
          	
          	

Ren-Dhoumin

Dear writers:
          
          Putting "And also," or, "And plus" in a sentence is just saying "And And," or, "Plus Plus."
          
          This does not mean you can not have those words in the same sentences. Let me explain with an example.
          
          "Sally would like a sandwich, and she also likes grapes."
          
          "Sally would like a sandwich, and she likes grapes too."
          
          ^ These are incorrect. You basically said "and she and likes grapes." Which makes no sense. It would be grammatically correct if you took out one of the 'in addition' words. So the sentence would read:
          
          "Sally would like a sandwich; she also likes grapes."
          Or
          "Sally would like a sandwich, and she likes grapes."
          Or
          "Sally would like a sandwich; she likes grapes too."
          
          ^ This is correct. You executed your sentence perfectly and you said what you wanted to say without any confusion or duplication!
          
          It's not always that way though. Since English is so high maintenance, It differs depending on the way you place the 'in addition' word.
          
          You would not need to change the sentence if it were like this:
          
          "Sally would like a sandwich; she also likes grapes and apples."
          
          Since 'And' is with a subject, it does not need to be removed. Another example.
          
          "Jacob is waiting for Sally at a café. He knows what Sally likes to eat. He also likes sandwiches, apples and grapes." 
          
          Be weary of words you put together when they mean the same thing. If not to exaggerate a sentence, it becomes grammatically incorrect and often distracting. 
          
          Hope it's not confusing, Lol.
          
          

Ren-Dhoumin

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A lot of my family members are mad at me because I said if I ever have children, I'm going to teach them about rape, possible predators and safety measures to follow at the age of 5. There is a lot of murder and rape in my country, especially with children. Am I wrong? I need someone else's perspective.

Ren-Dhoumin

@Robiniathot Thank, you because I genuinely don't get the anger.
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ConfusedInThisLife

@Ren-Dhoumin  no that's great to teach them
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Ren-Dhoumin

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My mom and sister just graduated college. To celebrate, we went to dinner at a restaurant. An older woman walked in stared at me for a bit and smiled at me so I smiled back at her-- That was 4 days ago and I still feel like I'm the shit. 
          
          Yes she was attractive. No I'm not Gay. 

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@Ren-Dhoumin older women>>>>>>>
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calmandsupergay

hey there, i saw your profile pic and i'm wondering what does that flag stands for?

calmandsupergay

@PeacefulTime190 i see , i was just curious. Thanks for answering 
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Ren-Dhoumin

@PeacefulTime190 Hi, It's Aromantic Asexual!
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