This is about me? *Pokes the edges.* Lovely. 

I'm a teenager, a female, I draw, take photos, and I write. [Obviously.]

About my reviews:
I really try to be as constructive as I can. If I seem somewhat critical, it's only because I'm trying to make you into a great author / authoress. My reviews can get long, but it's because I really enjoyed it or I want to be a sweetheart, not to bash you. I do say some, ok maybe not some, but a lot of cuss words, so if I offend; I don't mean to. I may seem like a so called "bitch" if I tell you if the canon characters are out of character, or maybe when I pin-point your character as a Mary-Sue. Remember, this isn't about me being a basher; this is all about you being a better author / authoress.

Overall, if it's really long, I means I enjoyed it. If it's short, that means that something's going to be ugly.

Small things that I notice in fan fictions that really tick me off...

- Horrible spelling and bad grammar. Come on guys, when you don't care, it shows.
- A lot of out of character actions by canon characters. Yes, I've done it too, so this also includes me too.
- Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus. If you want to create a like-able character, give them flaws, such as, they're over-confident, they get ass-whooped in a fight, etc.
- A lot of screaming. ie: "YOU BASTARD!!!!111!!!ONE!!" every paragraph. Be a bit more original.
- Gothic love romances that are sappy and un-realistic. "I love you, but I'll kill myself instead to save you the trouble of dealing with me" is what I usually find in stories like those.
- Characters that have sex and only sex on their minds. Do you have sex on your mind all the time? Yes? If so, please go shoot a tree. No? Good.
- Captain Kirking. This is when the canon character is so twisted they're no longer that character for the series.
- Plots that make no sense. This speaks for itself.

My stories I'm working on at the moment...

1. Black Fantasy
2. In Dark Waters
3. I Can't Believe You Anymore
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