I am Kyra:
https://www.wattpad.com/269627274-i-am-kyra-preface
Read the preface. Just that. One hundred little words. Then we'll talk.
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I write. I like to write. Bringing stories, places, people to life is fun. A lot of fun.
Like something that I wrote? Great; comment and tell me why.
Think I could do something better? Let me know. Critique won't do any good if it's trapped in your head!
I don't insist on constructive criticism. Writing is about fervor and emotion and passion. If you want to comment something on a piece of my work, then comment away.
Now that that's out of the way, go make yourself a cup of something tasty, curl up in a secluded spot and pick out a story.
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ON asking for critique:
I have no issue in critiquing the works of others, but remember that I am doing you a favour. If you wish me to read an exert and critique it, then in return I require that you to follow me. Preferably I would ask that you add my work to a reading list and share it with others - like you, I am trying to build a readership.
IN return, I will critique a piece of work up to 3,000 words, *thoroughly* - that means I tear into the flesh of the writing. I will highlight grammatical errors, comment on tone and structure, offer thoughts on dialogue and conclude with a overall statement.
I think that's a pretty sweet deal for the both of us.
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