Hey, if you haven't checked out Avalon Awaits yet, I would really appreciate it if you could! Feedback would also be greatly appreciated, as, while I don't think I'm a bad writer, I know I have a while to go before I would actually call myself one, and feedback will help me improve my writing, because, while the story makes sense in MY head, the more important thing is that it makes sense in yours.
Yours,
J.A.G.