Reso501st

Hey, posted a new story up(or most of it) on this profile, so if you could all check it out, that'd be great! It's a short one, but I like the perspective and style of it, and I'd really like some second opinions on it, if possible. So, I'll say thanks for spending some time looking at it ahead of time, and I hope it entertains you to some extent. 
          	Yours,
          	              J.A.G.

Reso501st

Almost forgot, It's name is This Pale Crimson Blossom. That just might be important. :)
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Reso501st

Hey, posted a new story up(or most of it) on this profile, so if you could all check it out, that'd be great! It's a short one, but I like the perspective and style of it, and I'd really like some second opinions on it, if possible. So, I'll say thanks for spending some time looking at it ahead of time, and I hope it entertains you to some extent. 
          Yours,
                        J.A.G.

Reso501st

Almost forgot, It's name is This Pale Crimson Blossom. That just might be important. :)
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Reso501st

Hey, if you haven't checked out Avalon Awaits yet, I would really appreciate it if you could! Feedback would also be greatly appreciated, as, while I don't think I'm a bad writer, I know I have a while to go before I would actually call myself one, and feedback will help me improve my writing, because, while the story makes sense in MY head, the more important thing is that it makes sense in yours.
          Yours, 
                        J.A.G.