Hi, my names Olivia, I'm 22 and writing is my passion. I love reading other stories or poems and what not. I would greatly appreciate constructive criticism for my works. I really need feedback in order to work on making my stories enjoyable for everyone. So please leave a comment below after reading my story(s). Thank you. Also if you want suggest any story to me, I'm free to read anything. And I will leave any feedback.
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Hi guys, sorry about disappearing, currently I'm revising the first couple of chapters of HellFire and it will be up again shortly.View all Conversations
Stories by RetroAnimal
- 3 Published Stories

In Darkest Times: Astradell Chroni...
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An ancient darkness.
A newly found kingdom.
Terrifying love and a shocking truth.
There is no way back home...

100 One-Shot Challenge
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I am starting this challenge to improve my writing and get me back into writing. I am completely open to crit...

The Works of RetroAnimal
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In this there will be works of short stories and poems. Many from my sixth period compostion honors class but...