Hi, my names Olivia, I'm 22 and writing is my passion. I love reading other stories or poems and what not. I would greatly appreciate constructive criticism for my works. I really need feedback in order to work on making my stories enjoyable for everyone. So please leave a comment below after reading my story(s). Thank you. Also if you want suggest any story to me, I'm free to read anything. And I will leave any feedback.
  • North Las Vegas, Nevada
  • JoinedMay 7, 2011


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RetroAnimal RetroAnimal Feb 27, 2015 12:45AM
Hi guys, sorry about disappearing, currently I'm revising the first couple of chapters of HellFire and it will be up again shortly.
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In Darkest Times: Astradell Chronicles by RetroAnimal
In Darkest Times: Astradell Chroni...
An ancient darkness. A newly found kingdom. Terrifying love and a shocking truth. There is no way back home...
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100 One-Shot Challenge by RetroAnimal
100 One-Shot Challenge
I am starting this challenge to improve my writing and get me back into writing. I am completely open to crit...
The Works of RetroAnimal by RetroAnimal
The Works of RetroAnimal
In this there will be works of short stories and poems. Many from my sixth period compostion honors class but...
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