Camix2000

Hey! I read your book and would like to say it's very good! I would really recommend adding climax to the story like events or giving specific characters their own small backstories. It always entertains the readers! Make sure to check spelling and you pretty much got your own excellent story! Good job on your writing so far! ヾ(^∀^)ノ

RetroSpecter134

@Camix2000 But I'll Have To Do Backstories In Chap 8 Chap 6 W.I.P
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RetroSpecter134

@Camix2000  Thanks But I Alr Gave A Backstory On My Charater So I Just Have To Work On The Other 2
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