Retromoviegirl

Dear readers,
          
          That is the new version of one of my, first stories night lust the original to work the title and original cover are still available, however I have created something I'm calling a definitive edition of the story the first chapter is up now please feel free to tell me what you think and leave constructive criticism and feedback.
          
          The story will remain pretty much the same except for some new characters that will be added later on the original version the chapters were too long and this version the chapters are edited using grammarerly which will hopefully make the story more understandable for you.
          
          If you have any suggestions feel free to mention them in the comments and vote for your favorite chapters I hope you enjoy this version of the story the first chapter 8 820 words I hope that's not too long but I was trying not to make it sort either I hope you enjoy this new version of the story like I said and happy reading and I'll talk to you in my next update.

NEW PARTS OUT NOW PLEASE READ THEM AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK 

Hey guys,
          
          The survey out now answer the questions and let me know what you think and enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks and events for the feedback

Dear readers,
          
          Three new chapters are out now be sure to read them and let me know what you think I will also be putting up the survey which is not part of the story which I will appear shortly so that I can get feedback from you as far as what you think of the story aside from the editing of course which is not yet been done because this is not the definitive edition of the story I will be writing a more definitive edition of the story when this version is finished that is why I have back so go ahead and read the three chapters are out now and leave your comments and also do me a favor and answer the questions in the survey as well.
          
          Hope you enjoy the story Retromoviegirl

Dear reader,
          
          I will be writing new parts of the diary of C a story of love & redemption tonight I will also be writing at least one part because I don't like how it came out please feel free to leave constructive criticism on any part of the of my story that you like and answer the questions I asked at the end of the parts that are posted so far I would like to thank all the people that read the story so far feel please feel free to put it on your reading list.
          
          Hopefully these parts will be posted soon as I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. Retromoviegirl

New parts o my book the diary of C a story of love a story &Redemption out now

Reworking my book the diary of C a story of love & Redemption the chapters are shorter making it easier to read hopefully the 20 parts published so far please feel free to leave comments you feedback is  appreciate thanks
          
          Retromoviegirl ☺

, update thinking about me writing one of the chapters not exactly sure what I want to write that's why there's no update this Wednesday sorry next Wednesday definitely for sure if you have any comments make sure to leave them in the comment box of any chapter you would like constructive criticism only please if you don't have anything nice to say don't say anything and thank you for reading this story I'll see you next Wednesday bye

Update will not be ready on Wednesday as usual what will be posted the following Wednesday so be prepared for that and also I plan to rewrite night lust for Love which will mean that the Diary of C a story of love and Redemption will be on Hiatus during the rewrite of my first story please follow that story to find out how Candice and Sam's relationship started and what follows after their relationship ends.

New chapter out now