Oi lad, if youre still, ya know, alive? Hmu if need someone to edit for you. U love the stories, but the grammar and punctuation makes it a tad difficult to understand.
Also, I completely understand skipping words when typing, just kinda get into the zone and skip over cos your brain is going 90 and your fingers are goin 50.
I'll work for free, reading your stories is a gift enough. Contact info in bio.