@Revenant_Sage
Hi! I just read Chapter 7 of your story and loved the intensity! I also left a comment on the chapter. I'm a professional comic artist and would love to turn your action scenes into a paid comic project. If you're interested in hiring an artist let’s chat or email me: brooklynalison4(at)gmail.com. Keep it up!
Hi @Revenant_Sage I’m really enjoying the god of shinobi book!! Also I was wondering if you take ideas? I have an idea for a Naruto book if you’re interested? If not no worries :)
Ladies and Gents! The New chapter of Izuku Yagi: God of Shinobi is out Now!
@Revenant_Sage Hey, I read the chapter, and sorry for the suggestions, I just want to help!
Here's some help (except that Inori/Ikaru doesn't cheat or betray his friends and allies, as he DIDN'T have it as bad as Katherine! Though he draws the line at killing, some of his decisions and actions, however, make him seem like a villain in the eyes of those who don't know him well and anyone who hasn't experienced quirkism- with the exception of Kai and Izuku! Keep in mind that Inori's mom is a practical lady who NEVER let her feelings control her thoughts, which is why Inori isn't anything like Izuku!):
https://youtu.be/u-B8oK2LA6o?si=DA4WRTcvaGghjmeR
Spiders' weaknesses include a fragile abdomen that can rupture from falls, susceptibility to insecticides and pesticides, vulnerability to predators like birds and wasps, and sensitivity to vibrations which can betray their location, all while lacking significant armor compared to other arthropods, making them weak to blunt force and chemical attacks.
Physical Weaknesses
Fragile Abdomen: A short fall can cause their abdomen to burst, leading to bleeding and death, notes Quora.
Lack of Armor: Compared to scorpions, spiders have thinner exoskeletons, especially on their underside, making them vulnerable to direct attacks.
Poor Eyesight (Vibration-Based): While excellent at detecting vibrations, their lack of true ears and reliance on sensory hairs can be exploited by strong vibrations or sudden air puffs.
Environmental & Chemical Weaknesses
Insecticides/Pesticides: They are susceptible to common pest control chemicals.
Bad Weather: Extreme conditions can be detrimental to them.
Strong Smells: Peppermint, tea tree, and eucalyptus oils can repel them.
Behavioral & Predatory Weaknesses
Predators: Birds, wasps, and lizards are natural predators.
Blunt Force Trauma: Squishing them is effective due to their delicate bodies.
Lack of Strength (Relative): Despite their web-building skills, their raw physical strength isn't exceptional compared to some other small creatures.
Check this out!:
https://youtube.com/shorts/g2TeTQ6Skn4?si=AUctB8h3V3VfbbZs
Okay, I DON'T want Inori/Ikaru to be a Japanese version of Peter Parker (some people say he's a Gary Stu, and many are happy to see Milly Alcock NOT being a female Superman)! Though he's extremely vindictive towards Bakugo, he has shown signs of emotional maturity! He's practical to a fault (in one scene, he argues with a student about a movie character, and calls them impractical for wanting said character to go against their own family, which nearly destroys their confidence- which isn't what he intended), but is capable of empathy! He's somewhat of a cynic (as NO ADULT came to his rescue when he was being bullied, so he doesn't believe in seeing the good in people, and believes in viewing people for what they really are!)! While he tends to be extremely judgemental towards 'light suits' (Limelight pros), he is willing to put himself in the other party's shoes to understand them better (especially after learning Mt.Lady's true identity- as he already got to know her as a person, he doesn't have the heart to detest her!)! Despite his smarts, he will have some silly moments and make mistakes!
(Change it or reject it)
@Revenant_Sage Oh okay. Well I'll let you take your time. Other than that, keep up the great work with your stories.
Are you still working on this story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/375038946?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=JinnyKisaragi?
Happy New Year!
And check out this fic:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/374320245?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=NeehaShaikh9