Fatpanda0605
Do you know when your next update is
Victorygamer123
To summarize, the blue lock story that you make, I would say it's not bad. Having isagi to Isekai to the reverse world and having the knowledge from the past is a good idea. So the thing I didn't like is the name of the blue lock player that you create for the reverse world it just confused me a little. Overall it's okay
Victorygamer123
I started to notice some of your words are not capitalized. So you should focus on that as well
Victorygamer123
You should put their name in full name. Also I suggest you don't put their first name or second name just put their full name. So the other reader can easily know the characters. After all, this is my suggestion you can listen if you want to
ReverseWorldStories
@Victorygamer123 what do you suggest then? i wasn't sure what to do with the names