dchab12350

also be sure not to let stress or others opinions affect you especially jerks that just trash your story

Ootori_Shikikan

@ dcab12350 Relax bro , look at Hiro new Announcement.. Everything is clear there.
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dchab12350

@dcab12350 seems that happened to hiro
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Ootori_Shikikan

Bro , Hiro SAO story need more Author touch so please make it better... Follow the canon but bent it a little to make the story good...

ReviveDragon

Yeah. If Lipia add to harem, the plot will change. I mean MC is coma so he couldn’t do anything. Unless I revive her on Moon Cradle Arc. But I still find Moon Cradle Arc on google.
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Ootori_Shikikan

@ ReviveDragon  I think Lipia need more love tho , but i don't know how the plot could save her.... She could be a potential Canon character with OC Power eh.. cz we never know her true ability.
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Ootori_Shikikan

The arc follow canon but the dialogue i think we need more original dialogue and not just the canon... 
            
            And some more addition like kissing scene when Alice broke the red eye seal.
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