Rexburn12

Merry Christmas Everyone!    .

Ac1er_mi

@Rexburn12, thank you for reading my story and thank you also for pointing out the writing errors I missed. I know my story still has a lot of flaws, so your comments are very helpful.
          
          Thank you once again. :)

Ac1er_mi

@Rexburn12 thanks for that, I'll try to improve it for the next update 
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Rexburn12

@Ac1er_mi np. The story is good but some parts are cringe, and makes no sense. 
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