Rhiarnne

Hey All! I would really love some feedback on the first Chapter of my new novel, Terra Warrior ☺️ this has been over a year in the making, so I would absolutely love some thoughts as to the opening! 
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Rhiarnne

Hi there! I am new to Wattpad but keen to improve my writing and establish my works. I currently have a novel in progress called Terra warrior, and I would love if everyone could give me feedback on the first chapter. 
          Stay happy and healthy! 
          Rhi x