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@SaljooqAltaf I added the chapter where she tells her mother. You should check it out if you'd like and gimme some constructive critisism. :)

nice, addiction will put the story on a new path, but definitely hard to pull off, i mean since depression isnt really something that excites a reader, but somewhere along the lines of Oriana Fallaci's A Man, would be a good route. Good luck!!

@SaljooqAltaf I like that, but I was thinking more along the lines of Ema telling her mother and then her mom doesn't believe her... and that leads to her feeling abandoned, betrayed, hurt, leading to her becoming an addict to make the pain of her mothers rejection going away.??

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hmmm....a nice block....mother tries to confront boyfriend...boyfriend tries to beat her up....daughter walks in....knocks him on his head....a case in the court if they get caught...or a traumatic life where she cannot trust a man despite a NEW hero's desparate attempt to court her

@SaljooqAltaf good point ill consider that. Its just I've come up with a blank on how to continue it. I want the next chapter to be the one where she tells her mother but idk how to get it going...

its a pretty nice story, i think u should keep going at it, just for the sake of experience
          
          

For those who are reading and are interested in my story, my addiction or should I say addictions, I'm thinking about deleting it. So if you think I should continue or don't think I should delete it, share your thoughts please!!!!!

No problem :D

@aphrodite_123 Thanks hun!!!