RianNascimento477

Database 5 has been updated.
          	
          	Take a look and see if everything is in order.

DEIKO19

@ RianNascimento477  heya comrade! I apologise for being late, but i JUST NOW got an idea, 
          	  
          	  This is a Character i called "Valik"
          	  
          	  You mentioned that at the beggining Alice attacked and turned a bunch of children into cannibals right?
          	  
          	  
          	  What if one survived? And not only that, would then escape to the forest where he then would contemplate what to do
          	  
          	  
          	  He was now infected, needing to eat human corpses in order to survive, 
          	  
          	  
          	  He can no longer see his parents or his brother since that would endanger them, nor his friends, falling into loneliness in order to protect his loved ones, 
          	  
          	  And so, he decided that if he was condemned to live as a monster, he will use the powers gained to the claim vengeance on Alice for turning him into the beast he is now
          	  
          	  
          	  But not only that, he found about the teachers becoming cannibals and slaughtering the innocent students, one of them being his brother
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  So now Y/N and Co must stop Valiks quest for vengeance 
          	  
          	  
          	  In fights Valik would insult Y/N in order to weaken his spirit
          	  
          	  
          	  "You are triying to protect those monsters!? How would the families of those poor children react to this idiot!,  this injustice won't go unpunished!, I will avange my brother and all the lives they took away till my last breath!"
          	  
          	  
          	  He is pretty tall, just slightly taller than Y/N
          	  
          	  He's hair unlike the rest is Silver colored, shiny and all that
          	  
          	  He wears long elastic  trousers, a sweater, and wilds 2 weapons, a gauntlet on his left arm with sharp claws (like Horus From WH40K) and a sword, and also shoes to grind on rails like Sonic in his games,
          	  
          	  
          	  He has multiple scars on his body due to having to deal with multiple demons
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StoneOfBreakCore

Hello! I love your FPE book and it has became one of my favorite stories of all time! What if I make Chapter 1 - Database 2 as a comic? (and post it to Wattpad) I think it would be cool. Also I’ve always kinda seen those chapters as a Season 1.

RianNascimento477

Database 5 has been updated.
          
          Take a look and see if everything is in order.

DEIKO19

@ RianNascimento477  heya comrade! I apologise for being late, but i JUST NOW got an idea, 
            
            This is a Character i called "Valik"
            
            You mentioned that at the beggining Alice attacked and turned a bunch of children into cannibals right?
            
            
            What if one survived? And not only that, would then escape to the forest where he then would contemplate what to do
            
            
            He was now infected, needing to eat human corpses in order to survive, 
            
            
            He can no longer see his parents or his brother since that would endanger them, nor his friends, falling into loneliness in order to protect his loved ones, 
            
            And so, he decided that if he was condemned to live as a monster, he will use the powers gained to the claim vengeance on Alice for turning him into the beast he is now
            
            
            But not only that, he found about the teachers becoming cannibals and slaughtering the innocent students, one of them being his brother
            
            
            
            So now Y/N and Co must stop Valiks quest for vengeance 
            
            
            In fights Valik would insult Y/N in order to weaken his spirit
            
            
            "You are triying to protect those monsters!? How would the families of those poor children react to this idiot!,  this injustice won't go unpunished!, I will avange my brother and all the lives they took away till my last breath!"
            
            
            He is pretty tall, just slightly taller than Y/N
            
            He's hair unlike the rest is Silver colored, shiny and all that
            
            He wears long elastic  trousers, a sweater, and wilds 2 weapons, a gauntlet on his left arm with sharp claws (like Horus From WH40K) and a sword, and also shoes to grind on rails like Sonic in his games,
            
            
            He has multiple scars on his body due to having to deal with multiple demons
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Kingkari_vines

Hey bro, just wanted to say that I have enjoyed your Fpe story. It is really good. And honestly it inspired me to make one of my own. I already have the character design and everything but I was wondering if you can give me tips on what to do. I have a discord if you want to talk on there.

ToKrsBrozoskiWester1

You will make a special new year chapter or not i got this question

ToKrsBrozoskiWester1

Ok happy new year for you and your family i wish all Good for you all
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RianNascimento477

@ToKrsBrozoskiWester1 No. Chapter 32 is the last Chapter for this year.
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RianNascimento477

I accidentally deleted a few comments while editing the Christmas Chapter post-release... To whoever requested their OC to be added to my book, please make sure to comment and inform me again... Sorry for the inconvenience XD.

Kingkari_vines

I made an OC based off of Logan Howlet AKA: The Wolverine. Don’t know if I want to straight up call him Logan, Y/N, or something else. Any ideas guys? I have been inspired to make my own FPE stories.
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ZenkaiRE5045

@RianNascimento477 This is mine agian hopefully you add him you don't need to add all the other stuff but for the love of me please use him https://www.wattpad.com/1495307450-my-oc-book-male-fpe-oc
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RewritenFate

@RianNascimento477 I wish for Mr Coal to be added. Don't have to, but you can if ya want to. 
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