Ricaplaza1521

Been making a new story lately, enjoy the read. Still fixing whats next with Well rounded. I have another one thats scifi but still in the works.

Krischal111

hey brother, where are you ? are you sick ? any other problem ? lately, which ever i read , that book's writer always got sick , in a accident, cancer or if lucky a job .  so, can you just give us some info about your disapparance. hope you are fine and love your work.

kisjsijxjjdiejne

Please can you make one punch man x to be hero x
          
          Mc: saitama

kisjsijxjjdiejne

@Ricaplaza1521 Well that's what makes it interesting, like in the manga Saitama is like a bug/anomaly, Saitama will destroy the belief system in To Be Hero X
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Ricaplaza1521

@kisjsijxjjdiejne not sure if i can pull it off. considering the premise of how the world of "to be hero X" power system works. its funny to imagine that he is running around and one shotting things while nobody has faith in him. then the world thinks that that's how his powers work. the big bads would probably try to make him likable but Saitama was unpopular as things go on. the complete opposite of how their world operates.
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Ricaplaza1521

Hello guys, gotta say that I appreciate you guys reading my work. Real life kinda pulled me away from updating but no worries, I've been plotting the story while I'm away.  But you guys read this for free and I consider this as a hobby, so just saying I wouldn't be as consistent as other authors. But anyway, I followed some of you guys suggested and use AI to assist in proofreading. Oh boy, my grammar and everything else is wacked but you guys still enjoy it. Its gonna take me some time to improve  each chapter but your comments help me improve as a writer, so thank you. You guys might notice that the other stories here are gone. None of them had the theme I was looking for.  So i took them back to rewrite them.

soiree24k

No problem champ! I’ve been having the time of my life reading your story. Just keep improving and doing what makes you happy and things will turn out alright.
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soiree24k

Loving the story so far. Also is saitama in the og invincible dimension?

soiree24k

@Ricaplaza1521 yep I thought as much. I honestly wouldn’t be surprised if our mark were to show up during the invincible war as the only other good mark besides original mark. And he just puts every single evil mark on a t shirt due to being that much stronger than them and only a select few marks even come close to original mark.
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Ricaplaza1521

@soiree24k yes... you got it. My idea is  that both Eve, Mark, and the rest would more adapted in combat. Being wreck every time againts the perfect punching bag, that also punches back... hard. 
            Both mark and Eve possessing the similar durability quality of an OPM character. You can imagine Cecil pull loads of sh*t  to utilize Saitama the best he could and Sai being bored as heck  so he naturally agreed to follow.
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soiree24k

Cool. Also I just had a thought; if viltrumites are supposed to get stronger as they age and recovering from massive beatings and our mark ( the one saitama trains I mean) has been training and recovering from sparring sessions since he was a kid then and saitama is stronger than any viltrumite. Then wouldn’t that imply that our mark might be stronger or on the same level as original mark.
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