Ricaplaza1521

Hey guys, got caught up in the intramurals and I had to focus on my event yesterday. Won the bench yell which was good. But i couldn't write due to our dorm master locking us out of our dormitory to go to the intramurals. The night event was fun to my surprise. 
          	
          	As of the updates on my works, i got stuck honestly and had to focus on other stuff to get my brain going... but ill update soon after the who intramurals event is done.

DEADLYICON

@Ricaplaza1521, trust me, you won't regret trying AI. It's incredibly flexible and understands language like a person now. Talk to it like a writer, and it'll act like one. You just need to know how to ask.
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Ricaplaza1521

@DEADLYICON then Again... maybe i try it then.
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Ricaplaza1521

@DEADLYICON thanks... i would like to use tools but I avoid it due to hove AI only strictly follows a format. True it would make the grammar better, due to the fact the earlier chapters were made when i was messing around with writing. 
          	  
          	  Its just AI makes it flat and uninteresting. a lot of the words I use for description would probably be cut down and replaced with something plain. Its also not a guarantee AI would reflect the intent of my writing. So that's it. I am currently practicing to write in a more simple way because I'm not aiming to match the likes of Tolkien. 
          	  
          	  Thank you for the feedback though. It helps...
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soiree24k

Loving the story so far. Also is saitama in the og invincible dimension?

soiree24k

@Ricaplaza1521 yep I thought as much. I honestly wouldn’t be surprised if our mark were to show up during the invincible war as the only other good mark besides original mark. And he just puts every single evil mark on a t shirt due to being that much stronger than them and only a select few marks even come close to original mark.
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Ricaplaza1521

@soiree24k yes... you got it. My idea is  that both Eve, Mark, and the rest would more adapted in combat. Being wreck every time againts the perfect punching bag, that also punches back... hard. 
            Both mark and Eve possessing the similar durability quality of an OPM character. You can imagine Cecil pull loads of sh*t  to utilize Saitama the best he could and Sai being bored as heck  so he naturally agreed to follow.
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soiree24k

Cool. Also I just had a thought; if viltrumites are supposed to get stronger as they age and recovering from massive beatings and our mark ( the one saitama trains I mean) has been training and recovering from sparring sessions since he was a kid then and saitama is stronger than any viltrumite. Then wouldn’t that imply that our mark might be stronger or on the same level as original mark.
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Esneiberstekler

Listen, invincible has its own version of Saitama, his name is WOT PUNCH MAN.

AmirhanBadiev

@Ricaplaza1521 and in invincible will god onepunchman cosmic garou and blast appear together with empety void opm i would like to see how mark mastered the same power as saitama
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Esneiberstekler

@Ricaplaza1521 I WILL ADD it to your story, I want to see a battle of these 2 bald guys
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Ricaplaza1521

He was probably a stand in for other heroes they didnt get rights too. Like spawn that replaced by wolfman.
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orewaSaitamada

Can i ask you a question please?

orewaSaitamada

Oh Ok
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Ricaplaza1521

@orewaSaitamada  in the show yes due to some diversity appeal thing. in the comics, was a dude and war woman was the only female.
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orewaSaitamada

@orewaSaitamada isn't green ghost a woman?
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Esneiberstekler

When will the next chapter of OPM x Invincible be released?

Rejize000

@Ricaplaza1521 ngl we are same....i mean ihave 4 sibling but only a male child and the youngest one
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Ricaplaza1521

Working on it… im my dad’s only helper in constructing our house… the fate of being the only male child in the family
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Esneiberstekler

They released a trailer about Invincible

Ricaplaza1521

A fool he isnt stupid enough to cross. The 2nd arc will highlight the relationships Sai and the other heroes have with him.
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Esneiberstekler

@Ricaplaza1521 And Cecil trusts the bald guy with the cape a little, he thinks he is lazy, he arrives late, he forgets everything he is telling him, he obeys his orders when he takes away his work salary, He enters a private battle and doesn't give it much importance. I think Cecil still controls Saitama, he sees him as a fool and strong. But he has a chance to do with him.
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Ricaplaza1521

Yeah... I had to step back cause now i understand why the og Mark didnt work for Cecil anymore. Had to make a plot that kinda makes sense since Saitama was part of their world and the problems are avoided. In the trailer, Cecil was kinda desperate to protect earth. The AU cecil of my fic didnt have to go for it because he had the one punch man to get rid of problems. Problems that will be a story for the second arc. Thanks
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