Thanks for the feedback. I'm really glad you liked it. I think this version is sort of a prototype for a final manuscript. But I wanted to see what a few people thought before I did a rewrite. This November I am sorting another story set in the same "universe" with cameos by Gordon and Merl.
Just added a new chapter to Odd Jobs for the Undead, and uploaded the first four chapters of my latest book in the Elvis Sightings series, Bigfoot Blues.
Just bought Final Draft for iPad and really like it. It's better enough that it justifies the high price relative to other iPad screenwriting apps. I'm still waiting on Scrivener for iPad with baited breath though.
I'm a chronic insomniac and to ease my troubled mind I've started a book of zombie themed poetry. Everything from haikus and ballads, to limericks. You would not believe how filthy a zombie limerick can get.
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