RiceBunni24

RiceBunni24

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Fucking Writing 101
          
          Set it up right.
          
          God damnit. If you are gonna make smut, set it up so the reader will get more excited when it happens.
          
          Don't be a fucking dumbass. When I read a smut, the story was all,
          
          "Hey. I'm gay."
          
          "Go tell him that."
          
          Goes over to the person and tells them.
          
          "Okay, lets have sex."
          
          Like what the fuck. What is the process in their mind about how they made this?
          
          Anyway, build it up. Build it up for the reader.
          
          I admit that I probably done that, but I'm pretty sure I've learned my mistake and not do what the fuck they were fucking doing.
          
          Thanksssssszsszzssssssddjdjd